Saturday, July 29, 2006

Mirror

I look at myself in the mirror
and see how I feel inside looks
Love and deceit trickle down my eyes,
insecurity wrinkles my brow
Silence shatters with a roar of cries,
eternal void then casts a throw
Shadow of yesterday won't let me breath
and my heart won't let you go!

When eyes start hurting
and weeps subside
When body gives up
and I can't look anymore
I put the mirror aside
and bury my face in darkness.

--Diksha Neel 5th Nov '05

10 Comments:

At 1:42 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

be positive

 
At 9:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful poem..

 
At 11:31 AM, Blogger Yogesh Mehta said...

Its a very good creation. I like it very well.I find reality in your words. Its really very good.It touched my heart, you are a great philosopher too. Infact every poet is a philosopher. Keep delivering your good work.

 
At 11:50 PM, Blogger Diksha Neel said...

thank you swati... :)

 
At 1:10 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think u look again .. cos ur reflection i saw is pleasant and beautiful ..

 
At 1:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think u look again .. cos ur reflection i saw is pleasant and beautiful ..

 
At 6:05 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice 1 bt bit senti... all in all a nice 1...

 
At 7:50 AM, Blogger Vipin M said...

Good approach, expressing self-identity like this. I didn't get is it a instant feelings or imaginary feelings.
Good one...
Expecting more ...

 
At 10:26 AM, Blogger Victor Guerra said...

Excellent word usage and soft lines. Keep that going!

 
At 10:06 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sundar likhan ahe, jar Marathit aste tar ajunahi sundar aste.

 

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