Mirror
I look at myself in the mirror
and see how I feel inside looks
Love and deceit trickle down my eyes,
insecurity wrinkles my brow
Silence shatters with a roar of cries,
eternal void then casts a throw
Shadow of yesterday won't let me breath
and my heart won't let you go!
When eyes start hurting
and weeps subside
When body gives up
and I can't look anymore
I put the mirror aside
and bury my face in darkness.
--Diksha Neel 5th Nov '05
10 Comments:
be positive
beautiful poem..
Its a very good creation. I like it very well.I find reality in your words. Its really very good.It touched my heart, you are a great philosopher too. Infact every poet is a philosopher. Keep delivering your good work.
thank you swati... :)
I think u look again .. cos ur reflection i saw is pleasant and beautiful ..
I think u look again .. cos ur reflection i saw is pleasant and beautiful ..
nice 1 bt bit senti... all in all a nice 1...
Good approach, expressing self-identity like this. I didn't get is it a instant feelings or imaginary feelings.
Good one...
Expecting more ...
Excellent word usage and soft lines. Keep that going!
Sundar likhan ahe, jar Marathit aste tar ajunahi sundar aste.
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