Summer Rain
The day was hot and dusty
My heart tired and thirsty
Walking in Sun exasperated
Value of my pearls, I debated
Miles I walked, pearls in hand
People saw them with minds in sand
Said, "Not pearls, just stones collected"
Cheek bedewed, my heart berated
Glorifying Earth when came Summer Rain
Sparkled my hand and sparkled again
Deep deep down bent nature's troy
Wet my eyes then beamed in joy!
Diksha Neel.........March 7,8 2006
posted by Diksha Neel @ 3:06 PM
15 comments
15 Comments:
Summer Rain....nice poem lady!!
Glorifying Earth when came Summer Rain
Sparkled my hand and sparkled again
Deep deep down bent nature's troy
Wet my eyes then beamed in joy!
Its been raining almost every eve these days in B'lore...thts wht I hear from ma friends, who are enjoying the Summer rain :D
Came via Orkut...
Thanks arzOOOn :)
hi!
wow! we almost have the same muse!!!!!
these are awesome
is the rain here a cleansing to open your eyes and reinstate the value of the 'pearl' whatever it may be for you, life, love etc?
hi nandi23...
the rain here is indeed a cleansing to open up eyes...but those of other people. 'pearl' is my creativity, my research :)
Hey lovely poems........liked most of your work :)
hey coolvir...thanks a lot :)
You write so well! You should post regularly.
hi saurabh,
thanks for the compliment.
i'll increase my frequency of posting.
take care.
Diksha..read your poems at Kuan's blog..actually after the second one (My Beloved) that I realised that the pet had been you !!
Kuan was just a publisher !!
I have to say now whatever I had said to him for the July 23rd poem there..it was absolutely brilliant..so erotic and spiritual at the same time.
I fell in love all over again.Those lines were amazing and beautiful !!
GOnna come back for more.You've got me hung girl.
Hey Cinderella, thank you very much. Your words have made my day! I'll surely put in more poems. Take care!
Brilliant, after seeing your stuff at kuan's site I had to stop here. You have an amazing talent for writing!
Thank you all...this is really very motivating!
Simly superb....I like very much ..our feelings r coincedence.....i love her blog
Praveen
I Cant Express what a wonder....Hope u become a Arundhathi Roy
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