The Sun
The Sun rose in the morning
through footpaths
on the head of the beggar
It shone and woke him up
With another day for begging
The Sun rose in the morning
through sliding windows
on the curtains of a bunglow
It shone and woke the rich man up
With another day for riches
The roads of the two crossed
on a traffic signal when the beggar
waved for money from the
glasses of the rich man's car
The Sun shone on the coin dropped
in by the rich man
The Sun shone in the hands
of the beggar
The Sun went back in the night
It had given light
One who saw through the light
didn't sleep
One who slept through the light
got up next morning
When the Sun rose again
through footpaths and curtains
-Diksha Neel, 14th Jan 2009
10 Comments:
Hey Diksha,
i somehow didnt get the end well. please help me understand.
-N
Hi,
nice composition...and a very meaningful title...was just googling when I came across ur blog...
best regards
Vinod
lovely .......
The Sun, nice poem....got to read right at the dawn...
keep it up.
Really very meaningful.. God gives equal luck and opportunity to everyone .. It depends on how one uses them!
Great composion..
lovely blog and beautiful lines.
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This was real nice one which Coincendences a Reality of life in Poetic Form, what i understood was the SUN is brain, the Poor and Rich are phases of life that Brain passes through and the way tackles it, Keep it Up.
Metta,
Sandeep.
Nice poem
Nice poem
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