Wednesday, January 21, 2009

The Sun

The Sun rose in the morning
through footpaths
on the head of the beggar
It shone and woke him up
With another day for begging

The Sun rose in the morning
through sliding windows
on the curtains of a bunglow
It shone and woke the rich man up
With another day for riches

The roads of the two crossed
on a traffic signal when the beggar
waved for money from the
glasses of the rich man's car

The Sun shone on the coin dropped
in by the rich man
The Sun shone in the hands
of the beggar

The Sun went back in the night
It had given light
One who saw through the light
didn't sleep
One who slept through the light
got up next morning
When the Sun rose again
through footpaths and curtains

-Diksha Neel, 14th Jan 2009

10 Comments:

At 2:38 AM, Blogger Nikholic said...

Hey Diksha,
i somehow didnt get the end well. please help me understand.
-N

 
At 3:51 AM, Blogger Vinod Durge said...

Hi,
nice composition...and a very meaningful title...was just googling when I came across ur blog...
best regards
Vinod

 
At 2:08 AM, Blogger SUBODH said...

lovely .......

 
At 5:15 PM, Blogger Vinod Durge said...

The Sun, nice poem....got to read right at the dawn...
keep it up.

 
At 8:00 AM, Blogger Priti said...

Really very meaningful.. God gives equal luck and opportunity to everyone .. It depends on how one uses them!

 
At 3:11 AM, Blogger Ramesh Chandra Pandey (RCP) said...

Great composion..

 
At 5:10 AM, Blogger अनिल कान्त said...

lovely blog and beautiful lines.

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At 2:06 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This was real nice one which Coincendences a Reality of life in Poetic Form, what i understood was the SUN is brain, the Poor and Rich are phases of life that Brain passes through and the way tackles it, Keep it Up.
Metta,
Sandeep.

 
At 9:37 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

Nice poem

 
At 9:38 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

Nice poem

 

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